It's a pretty sad story and hits pretty hard. Life is hard sometimes. It's relatable in a lot of ways. But in the end it seemed pretty hopeless. There was no redemption arc that really encourged me. The story has potential but with the scope of the project I assume you had to cut corners. Overall it's an interesting experience and I look forward to seeing you improve as you strike the perfect balance between relatable and hopeful. Godspeed on your journey! :)
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It's a pretty sad story and hits pretty hard. Life is hard sometimes. It's relatable in a lot of ways. But in the end it seemed pretty hopeless. There was no redemption arc that really encourged me. The story has potential but with the scope of the project I assume you had to cut corners. Overall it's an interesting experience and I look forward to seeing you improve as you strike the perfect balance between relatable and hopeful. Godspeed on your journey! :)
Many thanks for your honest feedback !
I'll keep those points in mind if I expand the project, or work on similar topics.
Again, thanks a lot for playing;